(08/11/2014)
Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty,
other think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Paraphrase words:
people commit crimes; people became criminals; to explain
criminal behaviour
P1:
People
with bad characteristic usually get crime
1. Most
people today accept that parental neglect, low self-esteem, alcohol and drug
abuse are all connected in explaining why people commit crimes.
2.
Children who are neglected or abused commit
substantially more crimes later in life than others.
Similarly,
sexual
abuse in childhood often leads these victims to become sexual predators as adults.
Many
inmates on death row have histories of some kind of severe abuse. The neglect and abuse of children often
progresses through several generations. The cycle of abuse, crime, and
sociopath keeps repeating itself.
P2:
Agree with idea that the main reason of getting crime are social conditions and
poverty
1. Some
people are simply at greater risk of becoming offenders because of the
circumstances into which they are born.
2.
Most people today accept that poverty,
parental neglect, low self-esteem, alcohol and drug abuse are all connected in
explaining why people commit crimes.
3.
Social problems lead to crime: Normally
as unemployment rises, city revenues decrease because fewer people are paying
taxes. This causes cutbacks in city services including the police force. So a
rise in criminal activity may not be due to fewer police, but rather rising
unemployment.
4. The
desire for material gain (money or expensive belongings) leads to property
crimes such as robberies, burglaries and auto thefts
Reasons
for committing a crime include greed, anger, jealously, revenge, or pride. Some
people decide to commit a crime and carefully plan everything in advance to
increase gain and decrease risk. These people are making choices about their
behavior; some even consider a life of crime better than a regular
job—believing crime brings in greater rewards, admiration, and excitement—at
least until they are caught. Others get an adrenaline rush when successfully
carrying out a dangerous crime. Others commit crimes on impulse, out of rage or
fear.
The
desire for material gain (money or expensive belongings) leads to property
crimes such as robberies, burglaries, white-collar
crimes, and auto thefts. The desire for
control, revenge, or power leads to violent crimes such as murders, assaults,
and rapes. These violent crimes usually occur on impulse or the spur of the
moment when emotions run high. Property crimes are usually planned in advance.
Solutions to tackle
crime:
· Individualists
tend to focus on individual weakness or lack
of 'values' as the reason why people commit crimes. Ultimately if someone
chooses to commit a crime, that is their responsibility. If caught, the
individual should pay the consequences. Individualists feel that society needs
clearer rules and strong punishments to minimise criminal behaviour. If
punishments were stronger and the police and the courts had more powers, there
would be less crime.
·
Collectivists feel that in order to
tackle crime, the social conditions which create the conditions for crime need
to be addressed. So, better housing, better employment opportunities and a more
equal society will make crime less of an attraction. If people are in work and
are content with life, they will be less motivated to break the law.
· Most
recent governments accept that there are underlying causes of crime. But
individuals need to accept responsibility for their actions. It is the
government's job to tackle crime; both its causes and the offenders. As former
Prime Minister Tony Blair said: 'being tough on crime and tough on the causes
of crime'.
Many
people think that innate
characteristics are responsible for the fact that some people turn into
criminals. While I accept that crime may result from individual characteristics
of violence or greed, I would argued that social
issues and poverty are the main causes of criminal behavior.
Person’s
nature may explain why a person commits crimes. Firstly, children who are
neglected or abused commit substantially more crimes later in life than others.
For instance, sexual abuse in childhood often leads these victims to become
sexual predators as adults. Similarly, many inmates on death row have histories
of some kind of severe abuse. Secondly, reasons for committing a crime may include
some bad characteristics such as greed, anger, jealously, or pride. These
people are making choices about their behavior; some even consider a life of
crime better than a regular job—believing crime brings in greater rewards,
admiration, and excitement—at least until they are caught.
Nevertheless,
it seems to me that social problems and poverty are the main causes behind
crime. There are many issues in society which might lead to an increase in the
crime rate. For example, normally as unemployment rises, city revenues decrease
because fewer people are paying taxes. This causes cutbacks in city services
including the police force. As a consequence, the number of offenders has
climbed in many countries over recent decades. Another reason is that, more
logically, poverty in general leads to a rise in crime. If people do not have
enough money to make ends meet, they will be tempted to
pursue illegal activities just to support themselves and their families
In
conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, I strongly
believe that the principal causes of crime are a result of social conditions
and poverty.
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